From b000ac1f26b335efcccbb5dc8634032a982a143d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: freesource <freesource>
Date: Fri, 14 Dec 2001 04:34:46 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Some more doc improvements.

---
 yard/templates/Example-Debian.yard | 15 +++++++-----
 yard/templates/Example.yard        | 39 +++++++++++++++---------------
 2 files changed, 29 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-)

diff --git a/yard/templates/Example-Debian.yard b/yard/templates/Example-Debian.yard
index ba4eaa7..ff75b68 100644
--- a/yard/templates/Example-Debian.yard
+++ b/yard/templates/Example-Debian.yard
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# $Id: Example-Debian.yard,v 1.10 2001/12/13 05:29:23 freesource Exp $
+# $Id: Example-Debian.yard,v 1.11 2001/12/13 05:43:28 freesource Exp $
 # Generated by make_debian.
 
 # Note:  This is provided as an example to show how a macro distribution
@@ -105,15 +105,18 @@
 /etc/hosts.deny
 
 # Network stuff
-# You will want to edit the interfaces file.
-# Remember to load any needed modules on the host system, for instance
-# if tap is used, you will want to do this:
-# modprobe ethertap
-# modprobe netlink_dev
+#
+# You will want to edit the /etc/network/interfaces file.
+# Make sure your host system kernel has the proper capabilities compiled
+# or the appropriate module, for instance if tap is used you need the 
+# ethertap and netlink_dev modules.
+#
 # And when you start your creation with the uml box you will want to add
 # something like this to the options where HWaddr (see ifconfig) belongs
 # to your network device:
+#
 # eth0=ethertap,tap0,HWaddr,192.168.1.5
+#
 /etc/resolv.conf 
 /etc/hosts <= Replacements/etc/hosts
 /root/umlnet <= Replacements/root/umlnet # Example network setup script
diff --git a/yard/templates/Example.yard b/yard/templates/Example.yard
index 076739d..b025ae4 100644
--- a/yard/templates/Example.yard
+++ b/yard/templates/Example.yard
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-#  $Id: Example.yard,v 1.14 2001/12/13 03:01:15 freesource Exp $
+#  $Id: Example.yard,v 1.15 2001/12/13 03:02:18 freesource Exp $
 #  Example.yard
 #
 #  Creates a minimalistic multi-user runlevel root filesystem with getty.  
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@
 ##############################################################################
 
 # init - parent of all processes
-# Choose an inittab to compliment the traditional init in the page below.
+# Choose an inittab farther below in the page.
 /sbin/init 		   	
 telinit
 /sbin/shutdown
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ telinit
 
 # Login stuff
 /bin/login 
-/sbin/sulogin # used by inittab.debian-min
+/sbin/sulogin
 /etc/securetty <= Replacements/etc/securetty.example
 /root/.bashrc <= Replacements/root/.bashrc.debian
 /root/.profile <= Replacements/root/.profile.debian
@@ -122,8 +122,9 @@ telinit
 #/etc/shadow <= Replacements/etc/shadow.debian
 /etc/login.defs
 
-#  Specify these binaries absolutely because boot scripts need them to be here.
-/bin/echo # for inittab.debian.sample
+#  Specify these binaries absolutely because some boot scripts may 
+#  need them to be here.
+/bin/echo
 /bin/mount 
 /bin/umount
 /bin/cat
@@ -135,9 +136,7 @@ telinit
 /usr/bin/find
 
 #####  SHELLS
-#    Bash is huge and requires libncurses.so.
-#    Many people use a smaller lightweight shell, like ash or kiss,
-#    and use that instead.
+#
 /bin/sh -> bash 
 /bin/sash 
 #
@@ -197,8 +196,8 @@ telinit
 /dev/loop[0-2]
 /dev/fd0
 
-#####  utmp and wtmp.  
-# Made by rcS if they don't exist.
+#####  utmp and wtmp (Made by rcS if they don't exist.)
+# Utilities which use them.
 w
 last
 
@@ -216,6 +215,7 @@ reset
 # /usr/lib/kbd/keymaps/i386/qwerty/defkeymap.kmap.gz
 
 #####  Empty directories
+/dev
 /proc               
 /tmp                
 /var/tmp
@@ -234,11 +234,9 @@ modprobe
 /etc/modules.conf
 #
 #  Modules from your host system.  
+#  Select the ones required.
 #
-#  You probably want to be more selective than this
-#  Do a "lsmod" and include the modules you use.
-#
-#/lib/modules/$RELEASE/*/*.o
+#/lib/modules/$RELEASE/*
 #
 #  User-Mode-Linux modules
 #
@@ -258,8 +256,7 @@ modprobe
 #/modules-2.2.tar  <=  Replacements/lib/modules/modules-2.2.tar  
 #/modules-2.4.tar  <=  Replacements/lib/modules/modules-2.4.tar
 
-#####  ESSENTIAL SYSTEM UTILITIES
-# (your rescue disk may not boot if these are not present.)
+#####  SYSTEM UTILITIES
 chmod		   	
 chown
 chroot
@@ -272,8 +269,6 @@ rm
 stty		   	
 sync          
 uname
-
-#####  NON-ESSENTIAL BUT USEFUL UTILITIES
 which
 ldd
 du			   	
@@ -316,4 +311,10 @@ badblocks
 #reiserfsck
 #debugreiserfs
 #unpack
-#resize_reiserfs
\ No newline at end of file
+#resize_reiserfs
+
+
+
+
+
+